I love the idea of this story/game. The changes of texts really captured my attention and I did stay trying to read the words shifting back and forth. Great effect. Backgrounds were so nice, it brings me attention more into the story along with the timed pictures you displayed. Awesome job
Immersive story, love the background makes it feel like readying some sort of magic book. Interesting and neat with the text cycling, the first one threw me off a bit with the changing days as I tried to read the passage. Choice to restart at the end is a nice touch btw 🙏🏾
This is really neat so far. I really love the changing text idea! I would suggest that you make sure that the text doesn't move text lines up and down if possible. It confuses my brain a bit, but to be honest that's what you are probably going for! I would take it how it is now, or cleaned up a bit. It will work with the games message both ways. Great job so far. I'm excited to see the final project.
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I love the idea of this story/game. The changes of texts really captured my attention and I did stay trying to read the words shifting back and forth. Great effect. Backgrounds were so nice, it brings me attention more into the story along with the timed pictures you displayed. Awesome job
Immersive story, love the background makes it feel like readying some sort of magic book. Interesting and neat with the text cycling, the first one threw me off a bit with the changing days as I tried to read the passage. Choice to restart at the end is a nice touch btw 🙏🏾
This is really neat so far. I really love the changing text idea! I would suggest that you make sure that the text doesn't move text lines up and down if possible. It confuses my brain a bit, but to be honest that's what you are probably going for! I would take it how it is now, or cleaned up a bit. It will work with the games message both ways. Great job so far. I'm excited to see the final project.
The art style is absolutely fantastic. I also love the writing change up. This is an amazing update that adds so much to the game. Awesome job!